As writers we never intentionally set out to frustrate?the reader, but mistakes happen and blunders are made, ones which we usually wish someone had enlightened us on at some point in time. So here I go, aiming to shine a light on those common slip-ups which can make?the reader say, ?Ah, what??
Naming Your Non-Speaking Characters
As you?re no doubt aware, when we name the major players in our story, this is our reader?s clue that this person is someone of importance, and they?ll note those names and pay attention. So that being the case, make sure you don?t make the mistake of naming your non-speaking/non-pivotal characters. Your reader isn?t going to care about the name of the next door neighbor, or the waitress who serves her coffee, the delivery boy, or even the name of the cute dog who lives next door and wags his tail.
You want to make certain you don?t frustrate your reader, because those clues they look for can get lost within the maze of names if you do. So keep in mind, that unless the person serves an essential role, they should remain a nameless prop within your story.
Too Many Bodily Processes
Here we go? Her heart raced. She struggled to catch her breath. Her heart beat in her chest. She sobbed in choking gulps.
Yeah, sometimes I?ve read too many of these short ?shows? within a half page of writing, and I?ve actually wondered if the heroine is about to have a heart attack (if you get my drift.) This can be frustrating for the reader, so make sure you go easy on these, and ensure you show in all the ways we have open to us as writers. Always remember to include strong dialogue and narration to drive your scene, giving a good blend of all the elements.
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Characters Calling Each Other By Name ? When Is It Too Much?
Oh boy, this is a something that frustrates me when I?m reading a book. And to explain it fully, let me set the scene to give you an accurate description of what I mean.
Here Jack is sitting on a chair in the dining room, and Jane comes in after a long day at work. It?s just the two of them having a conversation.
?Did you have a bad day, Jane?? Jack sat forward, watching her intently.
She tilted her head, and blew out a breath. ?Jack, what was your first clue??
?Oh, I don?t know, Jane. Perhaps it was the way you stomped into the room.? He stroked his jaw. ?Why don?t you tell me about it??
She clenched her fists and glared. ?I hate my job, Jack. I can?t stand being the one everyone unloads their work on.?
Okay, I went overboard on the name use, but what I?m trying to point out is that any reader will get that Jack and Jane are having a conversation, and as writers, we need to eliminate any overuse of our characters? names. So often I?ll be reading a passage where it?s just the hero and heroine present and they?re saying each other?s names in general conversation as I?ve recorded above. But why? I mean how often do you say someone?s name once you?re already speaking to them?
And to make certain we?re all on the same page, here?s the example rewritten without the overuse of names?
?Did you have a bad day, Jane?? Jack sat forward, watching her intently.
She tilted her head, and blew out a breath. ?What was your first clue??
?Oh, I don?t know. Perhaps it was the way you stomped into the room.? He stroked his jaw. ?Why don?t you tell me about it??
She clenched her fists and glared. ?I hate my job. I can?t stand being the one everyone unloads their work on.?
As you see, the dialogue was strong enough to dispense with the names straight after the opening line. It was more than obvious exactly who was speaking. So, once your scene is set, and your reader knows who is who, then don?t bring their names back in until the scene changes, or it?s unclear who?s speaking, or you?re just plain driven to drop that name back in. (And you?ll know what I mean when that happens, but until then, judge your own writing and don?t allow yourself to go overboard.)
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Question: Of the three common mistakes I?ve mentioned, which frustrates you the most when you?re reading? And if there?s any other that really exasperates, make sure you tell me and I?ll mention them in a future post. Because that?s what I?m all about?ensuring writers support writers by keeping us all informed.
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Source: http://joannewadsworth.com/2012/08/12/three-common-mistakes-which-can-frustrate-the-reader/
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